A man who aspires to be a great writer for video games, who also enjoys making clay models and photography.
Male
None At Moment
I hate School
New York
Joined on 3/1/24
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Remi-le-Oduen
It has some nice premise, but I'll be honest it's not executed in the best possible way. The character acts illogical. He is intent on trying things he had no access before, yet he goes to the mall for the vegetables? I really doubt that. Same goes for bringing his old stuff into penthouse. When you are threatened by dangerous monsters, you will not waste time on grabbing games or have a thought of touching suspicious slimes. Action scenes are raw, shooting at someone who is jumping at you is not that easy if you never did that before. If the slimes could stretch their limbs, why didn't they did that right away. Also, if this world is indeed inhabited by monsters, why didn't MC see anyone before?